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Mila's avatar

Thanks, this is so helpful, also my best wishes on your next book, I'm waiting for it so exited as waiting for my Levi 💖

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Emma's avatar

How do you go about stretching the plot during the first 130 pages? I feel like things are happening too fast! Love all these notes!

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Liana Cincotti's avatar

Totally understandable!! You can slow the plot down by focusing more on building your characters at the beginning—taking the time to let readers learn their habits, quirks, and backstory through the character’s every day routines (just my personal tactic though!!)

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Emma's avatar

Great! Thank you! I’m going to try and take up some space!

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Elle Steward's avatar

This was immensely helpful! Thank you so much for sharing!!

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Liana Cincotti's avatar

I'm so happy it was helpful—thank you for reading!!

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